Apr 01 2010
This is the first scene of the first day of my NaNo2k4 project, The Sky Pirate. Do I find dialogue fun or not? You be the judge!
â€œIt was a moonlit night, and magic was in the air,â€ whispered Eggplant nervously as he crouched behind the barrels with the others.
â€œSsh,â€ said Bola, trying to look around under the canvas awning that stretched over them on the dock.
â€œHe speaks in the third person when he is nervous,â€ explained Eggplant of himself, helpfully.
â€œHeâ€™s going to get his tongue pinned to the dock if he keeps making noise, isnâ€™t that right, Coop,â€ murmured Bola, drawing a wicked big knife to demonstrate her point Continue Reading »